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for Someone needs an heir!!!

by Ishki

person Queendel
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update....but where is the rest of the chapter???????????????? This is way too short.

I do hope that you are going to update soon with something much longer... Right?

I am happy that Heph got a chance to beat up Alexander a bit..but it was not enough...he didn't bleed, and it looks like Alexander is finally going to stop Olympias from meddling in his love life...about time!!!!

Anyhow, good chapter. Update quite soon.
person mai
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww~~ I'm dying to know what Heph is going to do next, please update soon!!! >.<
person helldragon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. i can't wait to read what happens next!!!!!!!!!! your story is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person CT
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really love your Phai. Can't wait til the next update... Keep up the good work =)!
person jenna
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good work. wanna know what happens.
person mischa
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey please update more! I really want to find out what hephaestion will do about alexander and olympia!!!!!!!!
person Queendel
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am happy that Heph is finally aware of both Alexander and his mother deceitful underhandedness towards him.

I hope that he uses strategy, wit and intelligence to thwart both of them. Firstly, he should be calm, pretend to take the potion and then sit back and watch everything unfold, and stop drinking Olympius potions. Then, he should strike where it would hurt most, leave Alexander and take his son Teodor and disappear. It is time that Heph forcibly take back himself and stop thinking of Alexander so much... afterall Alexander is not thinking of what is best for Heph...only himself. He is being totally selfish and self centered,

Great story. Wonderful chapter. Update very, very, very, very, very, very soon and make me proud.

BTW, if Olympius wants a daughter to girl talk with and dress up, let her go and get a real one from elsewhere.....Let her leave my beautiful but manly Heph alone!!!
person Queendel
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. I am happy that Bagoas told Heph the truth or where to find it. It is time that Heph's eyes are opened and he sees Alexander and his mother for what they are...underhand and deceitful while sprouting words of affection and love.
Update soon.
person Madison
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot, and I hope you get 6 more reviews soon!
person mai
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow this fic is sooooo great and unique!!! I can't believe I missed it until today, I read all the chapters in the row and just can't get enough!!!! I really hope after all he has done, hephaistion will get what he really wanted in return (why it has to always be about Alexander >.<) please write more soon~~!!! thanks once again for the wonderful story =)