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Okay okay, i give in to your demands, I UPDATED.

Again..this week and the past have been fucking busy as hell.

If this chapter doesn't make any sense at all...um....well then i blame it on me being brain dead because of all the DAMN EXAMS. And last night, i had this tea from Teavana that made me wired so i barely got any sleep and the people at work thought i was high or something...and i woke up in the middle of the night yelling random words.

That tea was awesome though, i'm gonna get some more! wooot! Again...randomness...

I dislike this Alexander with a passion. He is is a deceitful, obsessive, jealous tyranical and selfish male pig who neglects, abuses and pushes around Heph because he is vulnerable right now.

I want Heph to leave him for Cleitus so badly.........and for Alexander to lose everything, Heph's love, and the baby.

I mean, the Gods know what Alexander and Olympias did to a loyal and loving Heph and they should seek revenge on Alexander on Heph's behalf, as well as restore Heph to his manly self, after the baby's birth....and put the burden of birthing children on Alexander himself, see how he likes that being done to him against his will.

Update sooner.

Gaaaack! With a lover like Alex who needs an enemy/rival? I do like Cleitus here!:D
And I do loooooooooooove this story! Please go on!!Fast!! Hurry!!! I'm so curious!!
Emerald Amber

Hi there,

Impatiently awaiting your update. Please post soon.

please write more. i like the story very much.

=^.^=

hey ho!!! imust say. that wasnot nice, what you did to poor Phai... but that is the very reasonwhy i encourage you to continue: aslong as Phai gets a looooooooooooooooooong timeof sufferng and still gets a hapiend, i am sureit isfine...

okay!!! this fic is real cool!!!
i like the way it's written and the... how you say? plot? whatever, how the story is going; however, i would require that a few things could take place: Phai leaves Alex to go to Cleitius, Alex's mum agrees because she thinks he is to...euh...'hooked up' with his man-whore and... well, it is really not my place to say all of those things, as it is your fic; that means i will accept whatever you put forth for us (ur faithful readers) to read. ;)

Woah, you have it all figured out! i don't need to write any more chapters!!!!!!

lol...yeah...i'm kidding...i'll still write....

I have it ALL planned out in my mind...the thing is getting it in down in words....you will all be shocked and surprised throughout the WHOLE story though...

suspense is killer....i'm a murderer

Like this chapter very much. I do love my Cleitus and Heph pairing.
And, Heph should leave Alexander, with or without the babe.
Also, Heph could break his promise when he finds out what Alexander did to him.
Update soon