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for Someone needs an heir!!!

by Ishki

person Sakya
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to actualy give a review... sorry.

Olympia is a monster, Alexander is a fool and Bagoas is a vindictive little snake. What the hell is Hephastion doing in that place? Get him out of there, kill Olympia horribly and sell Bagoas to a whore house... I'm still considering what to do with Alexander, as soon as I come up with something I'll let you know.
person SilverStarSheep
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! You updated! *ridiculously large grin* And the weekend that I have off from college. Sweet! :D
person midnighteyes
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad for an update.. Kinda thinking this story was dead.. But i'm so happy that it's not.. Please keep it up..
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* how can they be so meanto him?? using him like that?! update~!
person SilverStarSheep
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... poor Hephaistion. *hugs him* Ten essays! Are you serious!?! And I thought my 10 page midterms and term papers well hell enough. :/
person PoeticMisconceptions
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I started readin this morning and couldn't stop. You have twisted this story back in on it's self so many times it is unreal. Yet each time you made it clearer what you were going for. I hope that you continue writing more than just fan-fics. You have a true gift.....share with the rest of the world.
person Queendel
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What Bagoas did to Heph was awful.

But Heph didn't have to submit to that...all he had to do was to up the ante and bluff Bagoas, letting him know that if he didn't help him, that he will stay with Alexander, forever, and he would never have him. I am sure that Bagoas would have rushed to help him then and without Heph being sexually humiliated.

And you were right, this was not enough!!! Update soon.

person mai
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!! it's............. well, unexpected! Hephaistion with those toys~~~~ *cover her face & blushing like a tomato*

still... eagerly waiting for more!! >.<
person mai
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, me again ^^ hehe I was is rush to be no.200 so I forgot to say thank you for the update and happy (belated) new year to you, hope you have a prosperous and wonderful year!!! =D
person SilverStarSheep
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very evil. Lol.
I thought the whole request from Bagoas was hilarious. Guess he's back to being the crafty, sneaky Bagoas we all know and love.
I'm glad Hephaistion has some idea what's happening now. I was beginning to feel bad for the guy.