rate_review Reviews

I loved that.. it was just very well written and very much in characotr unlike other things I have read. It for some reason dosn't seem like the author forced Sarah to like Jareth... perhaps the fact she didn't see his face in the beginning. I'm not sure but well done!

LOVE the artful descriptions in this; your words weave a spell around the reader, enchanting and drawing them in to your mystical world. Your words are like the finest poetry that a reader can become intoxicated on. Talent as wondrous and incredible as yours is difficult to come by; I loved the trick ending that made it seem as though Sarah was dreaming of the mysterious and sensual Goblin King. Or perhaps she was merely being sent back to her own world to indulge in her desires experienced before entering the maze...I relish it when the writer allows the reader to make up his or her own mind about the meaning of things. Thank you for writing this: reading it was a very enjoyable experience.

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!

That was harsh!

Well done.

TEASE! You better plan on continuing this story or I'll sulk. Please continue this story. Pretty please with a the requisit toppings on it.