rate_review Reviews

Delicious. This is delicious.

I'm glad it ended well. You're a great author, and it was a very well-written piece. I'm debating whether or not I should risk my good opinion of you by reading your supposedly "Sick and twisted" other work.

I giggle at balls


LMAO

I like the idea of somebody other "reciting" the charm to summon the Goblin King (or make him take somebody away) - it's an interesting idea.

Drawback: Dude, like, the language totally freaks me out.

Most of the characters sound like the stereotypical high school kids - not even real ones, only like bad tv show ones. Of course that could be intentional, but Sarah uses much the same language, and she didn't in the movie.

Also... the "all the evil kids pick at the main character" scares me a bit, because that's often a trademark of the dreaded Mary S.... ehm, Spaw of Satan.

So, between the really nice starting idea and the "poor Sarah", I'm curious to see where this story will go.

is that it?

Woah, woah, woah. Don't tell me chapter 12 was the end dear author. You better put up a new chapter soon before you find a mob at your front doorstep.

lol Hope you update soon!

Your going to update this awesome story soon, right?

A very interesting and wonderful story....I read all 12 chapters in one go.....please update!

I love it!!!
its such a cute and awsome story, i can't wait to read more and to find out what jareth has finally decided to do!!!!

***The man stopped and looked to be considering her offer. “Nah, I bought leather pants there a year ago and they ripped apart at the crotch, so never again.”***

Snicker . . . giggle . . . ROTFLMAO! Sniff . . . beauty! Been there, done that, except they were PVC! Interesting take on the "Sarah goes back" thing

(settles back down under the mushroom with hot tea to read more)

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