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for What the Master Saw

by Lilu

person cat
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah this is so good! I love your story! This is your first smut scene? no way. its to good...to good. come on man you have over 2000 hits UPDATE ALREADY!!
Keep it up!

~~cat
person Nahleili
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it finished or no? If not, please do finish it! Its wonderful
person sapphirexkat2
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this soon!
person Rebecca
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. Write more..please..
person Sparrow
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am speachless ... Can I hug you?

Please continue!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!
person Shea
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice!^^ I've just gotten home from seeing SW:RotS and needless to say I had fun thinking about different uses for the title 'master' between Obi-Wan and Anakin. Wonderfully done even with the error or two in there. Most likely uploading problems. I'd love to read more of your work so keep it coming!
person Xan
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*groans* What a tease! I want more. Where's the rest of the story!!! That was....really...damn...How evil of you to not have more :D I liked it lots.
-Xan
person Brae905
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so freakin hot! Want more.
person India
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please update this was really good. I love Obi/Ani fics and I want to see how this turns out. Was Anakin thinking of Obi Wan and what will he do when he finds Obi Wan was watching him.