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by vickyd3

person Shonee M.
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh! << THAT was my reaction when I finished reading the 3rd chapter. This is getting REALLY juicey!! I hoped that there's lots of drama and Brian-protecting going on in the next chapter!!!!!
person Jes Parker
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interested to see where you go with this. So far, I like your plot. It's original. I'm hoping to see some Brian angst along the way and maybe even perhaps, a little Brian hurt. And of course, Dom comfort. If you need a beta, let me know. I'm a pretty decent editor from time to time.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Jes Parker
person Marie
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a great fic! There's been a sad lack of Bri/Dom fics lately. :( I hope you can update soon, you left us with an evil cliffhanger! :))
Keep up the good work!
Marie
person K.C.
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHat did Adrian do to Brian? I hope he doesn't cause too much trouble. Can't wait for another chapter.
person Brian et Dom chauds mettent
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Dom and Brian are hot together. I hope Adrian does not cause too much trouble. I can't wait for another chapter.
person Becca
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far. Can't wait for an update.
person Neonex
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. Please try not to wait so long to post another chapter. What did Adrian do to Brian. I'm glad Brian and Dom are making up (and making out LOL). Can't wait to read more soon.
person Shinna
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just when they resolve their problems here comes more trouble.
person Becca
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update anytime soon? I really want to find see what happens with Brian and Dom. God they are so HOT together!
person Bouncy Bastard
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEASE, MAKE A NEW CHAPTER!! SO GOOD! CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER... Please?