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by vickyd3

person Rivana
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr... Damn posessive bastard. *scowls* Very nice story, angsty and emotional. Please give me a happy ending though...pretty please?
person shuchan
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alexander needs to get laid. he's such a bastard (shame not litrerally...). and get him his whore, bagoas. they're both assholes here. one deserves the other, huh?
person Domoto55
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!!!!!.......great job......can't wait for the next one....so please....update soon!!!!!!!!
person shuchan
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... so what next? a threesome? ok, no jocking...someone kick alexander's ass already!!! that prissy prick better stay away from the two love birds if he doesn't wanna end up ballsless...
person supercaptain182
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual another great chapter. The suspense as really been heightened.It's good to see taht Cleitus didn't give up on Hephestian. Alexander's reaction is going to be a killer. Excellent job. Can't wait for more.
person Queendel
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice and exciting update. I was happy that Cleitus got to be with Heph and I wanted to see some tender loving care, but you let the selfish tyrant Alexander interupt. Ptolemy couldn't have been watching very well if he allowed Alexander to slip by, or is it a plot between Alexander and Ptolemy to catch Heph and Cleitus together to finally pressure Heph to marry him or execute Cleitus.

So happy that you update and I hope that you update again quite soon.
person ConstantineMK
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, love, just wonderful! This is a brilliant fic! I love the way you don't take away from Hephaistion's strength yet are still able to describe him as beautiful and masculine. I hope you continue with this fic!

person Emerald Amber
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Allow Hephaistion to make his choice!! He can't be this humiliated, in public no less and stay quiet! After all is he not a man?
person Queendel
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was exciting...and to think that the older Companions seem to accept that King Alexander choose Heph, a man, to be his Consort.

I hope that Cleitus contains himself in public so that Alexander would not have grounds to get him executed, or to kill him, himself defending his Consort's honour. I hope that in private Cleitus and Heph get to have a really sensual and loving moment.

Please update soon...your updates seem to be so far apart *smile*
person Emerald Amber
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I hope you keep updating it, especially at this point, as Alex madness has reached its highestlevel. I also like your Cassander, he seems to be quite sensitive...
Congrats on this great fic!