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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so it finally came to an end... It's amazing how Sarah was able to love Smith after all he did to her, how she was the only one who saw some good in him. The birth and the message in your last chapters felt very Christian and like a birth of not one, but TWO Messiases...
Really well done, and thank you for both "As Insipid..." and this one. I've enjoyed the read immensely.
Really well done, and thank you for both "As Insipid..." and this one. I've enjoyed the read immensely.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, now whats gonna happen? Poor Smith :(
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now we understand Smith more! You wrote the perfect Smith love scene. How did you know what we fan girls were thinking?
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! A whole bunch of shit has gone down in the last two chapters alone! First the baby draining the matrix for food? And then finding out what really happened to Brownwyn's and the baby's bodies? And then the marriage to Smith? Holy shit! But the last lines of the last recent chapter really got me. I hope that you will go into it in the next chapter your write. From what I gather The Architect was a n abusive father and maybe that's where Smith got it from.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Oh my God that was good! The intrigue, and suspense are just killing me! Does Sarah have to die? It's just not fair, she and Seraph have just found one another! Damn that Smith, always spoiling everyone's fun for his own selfish purposes!
Two of the favorite things about this chapter:
1. Your description of the deteriorating Matrix code! Very cool!
2. The Sarah's final kiss with Agent Johnson. I mean if you have to die at the hands of an agent, it might as well be the way you described!
All and all this was excellent chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Two of the favorite things about this chapter:
1. Your description of the deteriorating Matrix code! Very cool!
2. The Sarah's final kiss with Agent Johnson. I mean if you have to die at the hands of an agent, it might as well be the way you described!
All and all this was excellent chapter and can't wait for the next one!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no, no, no!!!!! Don´t kill her! Find another way! You can´t just kill off all of your heroines!!! Very good story, Linda! Very good! I´m happy that you have updated more frequently recently... And flawless, as always!
Nic.
Nic.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I like the way you incorporated Jones memories with Sarah being involved. Can't wait for the next installment.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another intense chapter!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Breathless! As always. Your intrigues are brilliant and I end up in disbelief on how they could exclude something as thrilling as this out of the matrix series! They don´t know what they are missing! I´ve been so caught up lately, writing on my own story that I actually missed that you had posted a chapter! Me who used to check more or less every day! :-)
Looking forward to more! God! I hope the abortion succeeds! But with her luck...
Nic.
Looking forward to more! God! I hope the abortion succeeds! But with her luck...
Nic.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intense chapter! That poor woman!