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for Single Minded Purpose

by AgentSekhmet

person alexandra
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

The roles seem to be reveresed. Seraph in a way seems to be the one who was violated because he loves sarah so damned much!
person alexandra
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smith got his ass kicked! He was asking for it the bastard!
person alexandra
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again another intense chapter! I hope The Oracle changes that paternity ASAP otherwise Sarah is going to be screwed.
person Nicolina
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was in such a dark dead end alley about where this story was going, but now, throughout this chapter I´ve been feeling new hope and real sympathy with Sarah! Keep up the good work, I´m constantly checking for updates :-)
Love, Nic.
person Nicolina
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was painful reading... Ok, you sure made Smith into the most evil one could imagine... I´m speechless. But as always your writing is amazing!
Nic.
person alexandra
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! And I thought that Smith had changed. He's more and evil bastard than ever. Great job!
person Nicloina
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´m a lot quiter now but I´m repeatedly checking up on your story and continuing on my own meanwhile... This is so interesting. Ok, so he´s a bastard... but he was still a lot worse to Bronwyn, or was it that I really cared about Bronwyn? She got to me all from the start. He seems insane... you´re making him seem to be loosing it some more every day... That´s faschinating! Please continue! Love Nic.
person Alexandra
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smith you rat bastard! >:(
person alexandra
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so now Seraph isn't her brother .... interesting. I agree with The Oracle, if she sticks with Smith, no matter how great the sex is, she could get seriously hurt.
person alexandra
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was hot! Although I have to say he did fuck up when he called out the wrong name. I can so relate to that when I did the same thing during sex. Must remember that my other half's name is not Smith.

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