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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Smith almost kissed her! Damn! I wish that was me at that moment! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Smith is actually sorry for what he's done???? Holy crap! Please update!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´m so excited that you are writing more. Please, please continue! But I´m puzzled... Smith seems somewhat more human now, more sensitive. Shouldn´t it be the other way around? Or is it my misinterpretation?
Love, Nic.
Love, Nic.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you made Smith give the snide little quip to old snatch who made the comment to Sarah for the way she was dressed. I'll have to remember that line for the little bippy twats who walk into the night club where I work. And the fact that she's Seraph's sister! OMG! Way to throw your readers for a loop! Please! Please! Please update soon!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you decided to continue! This is turning out very well, but I think there is a repeat error in the middle of the story, when Max is speaking to Smith about the arm wrestel. Other then that it's great!
YAY! Smith!
And it's good to see that he seems to have gained at least some respect for women. :)
Too-da-loo!
YAY! Smith!
And it's good to see that he seems to have gained at least some respect for women. :)
Too-da-loo!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was heartbraking...! Is that a sequel?
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! A sequal! I wondered what became of Smith after Browyn's death. Please continue with this story you make him sound so complex, but yet you fix it to where he can be understood. He's finally realizing that he brought this on himself somehow even though he doesn't want to admit to it.