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by KatrinaVT

person Wooze
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't think this was meant to be a begin. It's just a short story, about Ajedrez and her men. The last one was Sands though, not so weak and stupid and innocent as the rest of them... And she got stung, big time =p
person Blackrosephantom
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start of a story.
What a nasty little brat...torturing poor, innocent bugs. Can she just simply do away with the pesky harmful bugs like mosquitoes? Still...I gather she will grow up to become an assassin? Please, do continue this tale. Your writing style is excellent.