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for Dancing Partners

by Anukk

person Freak_on_a_leash
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey hey hey...and just when it was getting...well it was already good....to the juicy part! man you bogus...hurry up and update! i want details Person!!!!! i love the story....can you tell
person Catchfire
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was not nice. Your a big meany.
That was not fair stopping it at the start of what looked like a damn good lemon. I'm just dying to see what happens. So please hurry up and write more soon pleeeeeeeeaaaasssse (reviewer looks at author with big moist puppy eyes and is glared at in warning by pet cat so quickly changes it to big moist kitten eyes)

ps keep up the great work
person Sarah
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I almost died when I got to the end and realized there wasn't anymore lol. You're a very good writer really brought the emotions through!!
person jai
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you must continu i love it. they so need to fuck eachother.
person Elizabeth Spiegel
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE DAMN IT! you can't stop there and leave it as it is just getting good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*sniffle* you have to update....I can get at least three other people to review....just update soon,.....please?