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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Moooore Moooooore nooooooooow Hehe
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I've been waiting for this chapter to be posted for months ^_^. I really like the way this is going, even if Jack won't admit who he is, but at least he didn't got hanged. His mother seems like a good person, stubborn enough to deal with Jack's temper and stubbornness. I hope you'll update soon and that you start to feel better ;)
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it! I think you have the best representation of Jack I've read in a fanfiction. In addition, your grammer and vocabulary are very good. Not to knock other writers, but they seem to lack a basic grasp of both. I'm going to keep an eye out for this story, it's very good. It stays within the realm of possibily and manages to be funny at the same time. I'm most interested in what's going to happen once Jack is cut down and how that changes things for everyone.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I do love this story. You're plot is one of the best so far and the scene where they raid The Royale were so cool. I laughte so hard when the lady slapped Will twice ^_^. I hope you've got plans to update this story soon because I really want to read the next chapter, and see if Jack is still alive.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how can you possibly leave it there like that I need more. I need an update.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT YOU CAN'T KILL JACK please finish the story
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great read, waitin for yer updates!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this well enough. The quality of writing isn't the greatest, but it's considerably better than average. I think it's a little on the slow moving (boring) side which is probably where you're hitting a problem. Plus there's no real center stage pairing, which is what most people drool over. AdultFanFiction.net = smut, smut and more smut. Once again, I liked it well enough, but hopefully the criticism helps you.
When you post another chapter I will go into more specifics with the writing critique.
When you post another chapter I will go into more specifics with the writing critique.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I think it's a great story! Just a guess, but the nobles on that ship are Jack's parents, right? And it'd be nice to know exactly WHY Elizabeth in no longer w/Will, and how Will wound up pirating w/Jack... Is there maybe an earlier story I missed?? Still, it's a great story...keep it up!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teeheehee! This story is good for laughs. Unbelievable that Elizabeth was dumb enough to marry Norrington but it's a good plot device. Please keep writing.