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for The Oubliette

by Lomia

schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE GOOD MORE must have more please update soon TTFN
person Bella Snape
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my first hot Jareth fic, and wow it WAS good! I have always wanted to write one, maybe I will now.
person SnapesPet30
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really hot! I guess I'm just a kinky gal. *Grins* Great job
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good smut. Yours are indeed the best. Please make some more.
person megan
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi!*smacks forehead* I liked it but the whole "master" thing did sting a little bit. You might want to write another one like this except maybe switch it around. *giggles* but then that is just me.
person ^^
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah..... things are going too fast!
person Amanda
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There should be more chapters to this!

Mmm, this story was good.

*bowiegasms*

person Srya
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a delicious piece of smut, my dear. I only have one problem: you need to work on your formatting. Each new speaker gets a new line for their dialogue. However, this may be the formatting problems I've heard a bit about for this site. Anyway, in conclusion, the only real problem I had reading it was a technicality. The content was beautiful.
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that story sounds awfully familiar...like the one i just wrote and posted.
person jareth\'s spanking hand
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...another perfect piece of romantic smut. The only thing I didn't like was the cheek slapping. Even if it was done gently. You are an excellent writer. One piece of advice though...please edit your story. Sarah ached, not ach, for Jareth to make love to her. Question: Where did Jareth get his collection of kinky adult toys? Ive been looking for them, and the shops here don't have them. Such a pity...