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Wow, go away on vacation and you go into hyper active drive. Watch your typos and people shudder, not shutter.

Great Story!!! Keep writing please. I can't wait to see what is in store for Sara.

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Here is what I think.
Your tale is amazing.

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I like most of this story. Please, do continue.

I'm FINALLY caught up!!!! OMG that is freaking amazing. I can actually identify with Michal's wife. (ask me latter if you really want to know) and YAY CrYSTAL'S not Dead! and I thought of something delisiously devious. You know about the blood/iron thing. but what if the iron rusts? I love thinking of horrible ways for Michal to suffer. I don't like the man. (puppy growls) Anywho I'm so glad I was able to catch up on my favorite fan fic and I so want you to write more! ^.^

Okay...umm...
Michael is one sick fuck.
I liked some aspects of his rough love-making.
Others...sheesh.

Hello, I couldn't find out how to email you or what ever so i desided to comment you on your story and say thanks for the review, I really did like your story, i thought i recognized your name when you reviewed. Yet again, thanks. Very good story

If anyone deserves to kill Micheal, it's his wife. Let's hope she grows a back bone in the middle of the night.

WOW. Your story was awesome. Some parts made me laugh. Some parts creeped me out. Persephone, Jareth's mom, rubbing boxes with Sarah, for one. Sarah's father, Max, filming his daughter and dressing her up like his wife, for another. I enjoyed reading your background notes. Thank you, and other soldiers, for protecting us from the Al-Qaida. How sweet that you have a baby. Hope your relative feels better after surgery. I especially noticed the part where you were bummed that not every reader commented on your story, and some gave your story a small rating. That's happened to me too in my tales, hehe. Especially with my Labyrinth story. What trips me out is there is a critic, or several, whom return often to give my Laby fics 2 stars. Other fans give it 3 or more. They are entitled to their opinions, but they return to make sure my Laby fics stay rated as 2 stars. Hehe. As for your story, it is wicked kewl. I'm sure others like it too, but are too tired or too busy to comment on it. I suggest that when you have the time, go over your story and edit it. Hope you write more later.

Hey there this story was the best!!!! i loved it so much! hurry up and write more! I'll be making a story soon too my Pen name or what ever is JarethsPlaything if you ever want to read it. I hope you have more fun writing the rest when you get around to it. Later,
Andrea