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update soon

Ok, good to see them back and now dealing with Max. However a couple of problems. A "bleeder" is a hemophiliac. The nurse should have been yelling code red or blue or something like that. Also, if one of my kids was in an operating room, you wouldn't be able to drag me out of the waiting room with a herd of wild horses. Ok, yea this is Max we're talking about and the guy needs some serious therapy. Why didn't they pick up Toby's arm and bring it with them? Chances are, they may have been able to reattach it. Ok, done ranting now. BTW, I don't want you dead, then you wouldn't be able to finish this story. Beaten to a pulp, maybe, but not dead.

Oh this is the perfect twist...I can't wait to read what happens next

Please hurry up and put up another chapter! your fan fic is great!

< best mother voice > Alright, that's it! Your Jareth privileges are being taken away due to no updates < /best mother voice >

Some of the best S/J I've seen ever. You really have done a great job capturing all of the flavors an sexual disire. I thank you for taking the time to write an post this.

This isn't going to over until Michael is dead. So hurry up with the next chapter already.

okay.....i'm trying to stay calm......ARGGGG!! it didn't work. PLEASE..Pretty please!!!!!! I can't take it any more!!!! what happens next!!!!! By the way...i'm loving this story!!! all of it... keep it going!!!

Promises, promises. Now hurry up with that update, or I'm going to find something or someone to sharpen my claws on.

Please for the love of pete, finish the story or at least tack on another chapter. I'm dying of wondering what's happening :oP