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amazing work... write more

Wow, very powerful.

WOW!! That was phenomenal! I don't really know where to start, since everything just melded together beautifully. Your writing is like what a good orchestra should be, with all the parts working together to become one unified masterpiece. The descriptions of what Padme was feeling and thinking worked brilliantly with the 'reality' of what was going on around her, particularily your description of her diluted feelings while Anakin was inside of her. The dialogue fit in perfectly, with just the right amount of back and forth between Padme and Anakin, but without making it too 'talky'... if that makes any sense. With the added pressure from Anakin sending her force thoughts and feelings, I had a perfect picture of what was happenning in my mind, and was able to really get a clear sense of what Padme was feeling. Her confusion, and to a certain degree disbelief, over what was going on with Anakin was pitch perfect given the circumstances she found herself in, and led perfectly to the revealation that it was only in her head. Brilliant work, and I hope we'll see more from you soon!

Wow this was so fiery and so intense! I love how things blur between fantasy and reality in her mind so that she can no longer tell if she is dreaming or awake! I look forward to seeing more!! =D

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!

Wow! That was extraordinarily well-written! Please, continue writing it! I'm a huge fan of Anakin/Padme. Their story was so poignant that it touched my heart. I think you captured Padme really well. Although there were a lot of things in the last prequel that bothered me, the one thing that I adored, was the love and the romance between Padme and Anakin. He adored her, it was somewhat like an old fashioned romance. Anyway, I'm babbling, lol. Keep up the good work!!

This was really well written. And I love the ending up to this point, but this better not be the complete, final ending to this story. I'll be sad if it is. I like the descriptive style you use too. Nowadays it's really hard to write descriptively without getting carried away, but you somehow manage it; I'm impressed. Keep writing, I'd like to know how this turns out.
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses

Oh my gosh! I hope you update! You updated in fanfiction.net but not here? Where the fic is UNEDITED!? Oh please ?PLEASE update!!!! And I found out you've posted the third chapter already on some other site, or was it forum? PLEASE I BEG OF YOU GIVE US SOMETHING!!!!

Excellent story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

WOW. This is really good. Can't wait to read more! ^_^