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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, I urge you to continue this fic. Great job and please continue/update. I'll check on this from time to time.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, THAT WAS SO GOOD, PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE, I JUST SAW ROTS AND IT WAS SO GOOD, BUT I THINK THAT WE ALL NEED A MORE HAPPY ENDING, I LOVE ANAKIN AND PADME TOGETHER SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start. Please continue.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was... amazing. I noticed it a few days ago, but didn't want to read it clearly said 'spoilers'. Now that I've actually seen episode 3, I just have to say... wow. And... damn. I love how this feels "trancelike", and can't wait for you to update it!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has potential and I think it headed off with a great start, I'm defintaely looking forward very much to the next chapter. The descriptions is you're story is wonderful (: It makes my mind automatically create images in my head, and its like a mini movie that plays out in my head . Did that make sense? Ah, sorry...
BUT YOUR STORY ROCKS!
Update soon!
Fukari loves ye ;
BUT YOUR STORY ROCKS!
Update soon!
Fukari loves ye ;
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Please continue.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing beginning. I could not stop reading it and I am looking forward to more.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, look forward to the next installment. Very well done.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, u kinda confused me w/ ur author's note. This isn't ff.net, sweetie. Its OKAY to post nc-17 fics, thats the whole purpose. Unless u wrote a graphic morbid detailed killing. Cuse everything else just won't surprise me, i've read some pretty nasty stuff out there.
The fic is good sa far, and will be looking forward to more updates. Hopefully u can get the unedited version out too. if not, would u be a friend and email it to me. ;)
Its the same name @lycos. thanxs.
The fic is good sa far, and will be looking forward to more updates. Hopefully u can get the unedited version out too. if not, would u be a friend and email it to me. ;)
Its the same name @lycos. thanxs.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused as to why you think you can't post the higher rated version at this site when it is called ADULT Fan Fiction and it accepts NC-17 stories. This site was created to house the higher rated fics that other sites are to afraid to archive for fear of the moral majority bitching up a storm, i.e. fanfiction.net. Are you saying that the full story is somehow X rated? Forgive me but I just don't see how that's possible. I've read some pretty kinky/violent/obscene stories at this site and they ALL were rated NC-17 and I'm not really seeing how your story is going in that direction. That's a compliment by the way.
One constructive criticism. You should fix the typos in your summary. It really reflects badly on your story and many people may skip checking your fic out because they will assume your work is riddled with misspellings and grammar problems. It's one of the red flags that veteran fan fic readers look for when searching for new stories to read. Just a thought.
Good luck with the rest of your story and I really would like to know why you think you can't post your other version here. Email me the answer if you have time.
One constructive criticism. You should fix the typos in your summary. It really reflects badly on your story and many people may skip checking your fic out because they will assume your work is riddled with misspellings and grammar problems. It's one of the red flags that veteran fan fic readers look for when searching for new stories to read. Just a thought.
Good luck with the rest of your story and I really would like to know why you think you can't post your other version here. Email me the answer if you have time.