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for Sin and the Sea

by Dhvana

schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Hillarious! I expected to find a lot of stupid humor when I clicked on the link to the story, but the puns were actually very cleverly inserted and the story was well-written. It even had a plot! The ending was cute, especially the last line. Simply put, you're a genius and I loved your story. ^_^
person Prince Bananfeather
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOO! IT ENDS THERE?! HOW DARE YOU!? *explodes* Make another chapter! MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
person Virtual_Libertine
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* Funny and sexy. Talent, my friend, talen. Could have been a little more BDSM, though.
person Taima
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... That was so deliciously sexy.... And hilarious. Wonderful.
person Cacao
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, that wasn't bad...great jokes, only I didn't get maybe a few of them. Great humour.
person Oliversgurl
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Blush* OMG...My parents are asleep and I've been trying not to laugh my ass off. That was great...I'm glad I'm not the only one with a dirty mind.

"Yar, plunder ye booty."
person squirreltacos
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD hahahaha! Oh my god, that was hilarious ha. I can actually imagine that happening in the movie...not like it would, unfortunatly. Great job, excellent writing.
person LOL
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA...that was a very good story....phhhttttt...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
person MerrysMiko
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*has herself a good long laugh* That was quite possibly the most creative use of innuendo I have ever seen. Yardarm.... XD
person Teh Dragon's Lover
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sitting in front of her computer, trying desperatly not to wake the neighbors* Oh God, those innuendos were horrendious. And that's what made this so funny. *gives up the fight and LMAO's* LMAOROLF. Good work.