rate_review Reviews

I know you probably finished this years ago, but I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it. I loved the small touch that you never had our heroine reveal her name, so that we can all imagine ourselves in that role. I was puzzled by the avoidance of sex, but it didn't bother. I thought your characterization of Jack was well done. And it's a very satisfying Mary Sue in that he plays the role the reader wants to see him play. Thanks!

gimme more......NOW! no seriously, this is th most amazing story!

oh no you cant stop there!!!! thats just NOT fair. i want... no need to know whats gonna happen!!!

WHY?! Did you end it there?! xD Love it, good job!! =D

I loved this story and please, please will you make a sequel? You honestly have Jack down to a tea. Anyway hoping and waiting for the sequel.

This was the best fanfic I have ever read... Ever. It was amazingly well written, and you got Jack's character perfect! I could not stop reading this story once I started, because it was just so interesting. I really hope you write a sequel, because the characters just went so well together.

your writing style is simply amazing. The world, the character you are creating are realistic and bring attention. I honestly was closing my eyes to bury myself in this fantastic sensation down my stomach while reading this story (and all of your stories including Jack Sparrow). But the sex scene at the end would be apreciated :D and I just looove to see him smirking this sexy smirk. Fanfiction is a great way to fulfill your fantasies but it's hard to write a good fanfic with a good idea. You managed both. my congratulations. fo my tatse I would like more words like "nipple" "breast" "wet" "hot" and things like that 'cause you're writting things hat got my over the edge but after ll those chapter I feel still unsatisfied :))) please write a sequel. and if you don't mind email me to tell me if you plan to write a sequel or a story with Jack Sparrow.
(sorry for my mistakes. English is not my native language)

oh sorry, that's my email :)
irmakl@wp.pl

dinloth

OH, you MUST write a sequel! It's too good to stop here! We must have more adventures of Captain Jack and his "mystery name" lass! Great story. Needs more sex! I really enjoyed reading this one. One of the better POTC stories out there. And there are very few sadly. Please write more! If not a sequel to this one, then something else POTC related! You're so talented!

Absolutely wonderful! Sexy, incredibly funny, and touching. Extremely well written!! I completely enjoyed it from start to finish. I was sad it had to end... 4 out of 4 bottles of rum!