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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like your story so far! I have only gotten to chapter but i like it! keep you w/ the good work!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like your story so far! I have only gotten to chapter 4 but i like it! keep you w/ the good work!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs like a maniac*
Funny! I loved it! Jack was superb and the character you wrote actually acted a bit like myself, which is good. Except it would have probably been a different T-shirt, but otherwise...
A really fun read. And again, it wasn;t just mindless sex! Come to think of it, there was none at all. Ah well.
-Kaytee
Funny! I loved it! Jack was superb and the character you wrote actually acted a bit like myself, which is good. Except it would have probably been a different T-shirt, but otherwise...
A really fun read. And again, it wasn;t just mindless sex! Come to think of it, there was none at all. Ah well.
-Kaytee
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was supposed to go to sleep about two hours ago. Then I found your story. Thanks! (Now I get to try to go to sleep with those...descriptions...running through my head.) I love it.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must say, incredible story. Its wonderful that you don't stick a name on the character and lead the readers in to fill with their own names. Correct me if I'm wrong but I don't believe you even mention height, hair colour or eye colour. Wonderful way to bring the audience in. I enjoyed the good read. Now excuse me while I go fall asleep watching Potc and pray to all dieties that this story will come true for me. ^_^
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-whines- the ending!!! hmph! cliff hangers kinda.. ...
but still it was classy to leave off like that right before the "consumating of love"
you have an undeniable talent. the way you describe each and every scene. is amazing. awesome job luv'
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but still it was classy to leave off like that right before the "consumating of love"
you have an undeniable talent. the way you describe each and every scene. is amazing. awesome job luv'
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it.
Kind of an abrupt ending.
A sequel would be fantastic.
Kind of an abrupt ending.
A sequel would be fantastic.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhhhh! love it! wonderful story an' please do make a sequel! I will so certainly review on it if in you do! love your writing and its style!
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't belive how much ass "I" kicked in that last chapter! That was the best fanfic I ever read, seriously, so YAY!! I was so sad when it ended... However, a sequel would be so awesome! You should make one with Will and Norrington and everyone in it! Also, I love how that wasn't smut, like you didn't need to do any real explicit stuff to make it good, it just was! Write more Jack eventually, please! You rock at writing.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well your story is very good. and I enjoyed reading it very much. but it can not possibly be over. you left WAY too many loose ends. like did she ever get back home, whats going to happen to Briggs, do 'I' and jack ever get together and become a couple and live happily ever after. you should really clean those questions. its horribly tacky if you dont. its like cutting a movie 20 minutes before the end and never finishing it.