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by amistillill

person Munkii1423
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude this story is great. i Love You ^_^. keep it up.
person Crooke
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LOVED then new chapter! MORE PLEASE!!!! I'm obsessed now...
person Angel
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Always a pleasure reading your story!!! Love it!!!
person Angel
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person Me
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Thats all i have to say.
-Alina
P.S. Your an amazing author and i cant wait to read more! (you inspire me)
person Lyla
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. jack is perfect, i can totaly see him act this way. i wish i could write him this well. god jack is a sexy beast. youre awesome. this story is awesome. i really want youto hurry and update. i cant wait to read what happens next. there needs to be some lovin. please hurry!!!
person Crooke
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story so much! Please continue!
person Lisa
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I will say your story is very good! The only question I have is, are you sure you have his accent right? I have watched the movie Pirates of the Caribbean a million times, and you almost seem to have given Jack a scottish accent. Perhaps it is the way I am reading it...... but I suppose the thing that really gets me is when he says, "'ye'". other than that, its perfect! You seem to have captured Jack and his preferences very well. Update soon!
person Em
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, best story ever!! Seriously, whoa... Hoping for more of those "you/Jack" scenes that rock. Deserted island would be good, if not cliche. :D
person Gen
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing. It absolutely made my day, and hooked me from the second sentence. You capture Sparrow perfectly, and I could hear him saying the lines as I read them. Please...make my year and keep updating ! ^_^