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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi, I love this story! It's so....cute! I guess that would be the right word for it. Good plot! Please keep it up!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the latest. She seems to be getting on a bit better now. I suspect that being with Jack is a good motivation for her. More please.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrreat update! Cant wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job capturing the sexual tension :)
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lovely story, you've got Jack's personality perfect. This story is perfect. Keep up the good work,
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Updates soon, I hope. *lurks in wait*
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I'm just on the 3rd Chapter but I really like the sarcastic tone she has and I think you got Jack's character down very well too =)
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update really soon. I love this story. 'I' am awesome. You write Jack perfectly. He's soooooo adorable.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teeheehee! Some of this is very funny! I do, however, object to the woman being such a blockhead so often if I am supposed to imagine it is me. The test of intelligence is adaptability and she is not getting it so far. Smarten her up.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY nice. Loved it, keep it coming.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing! Please write some more!!! I love the way you portray Jack. I hope that the main character (yay, it's me!) gets to wear a cool old dress, it'd be really awesome if it were the same dress that was in the movie.