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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I am really liking where this story is going--wonderful!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! I think its going to be heatbreaking for Connor to learn that Lexi is the daughter of the man who killed his father...keep the chapters coming!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a refreshing change to see an agent displaying more emotions than they do in the movies where they are always stoic, straight-faced and emotionless. Good job! And on a more personal note, the things Lexi's mother says during delivery were right on the money!!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY--YOU UPDATED!!! I loved it--not too much detail on the sex part, but enough to keep it titillating and erotic at the same time. Good work on the whole chapter overall. It was heartbreaking to read about Smith's funeral, especially from his child's point of view. BTW, will you ever let the readers in on who Connor's mother was?
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit......I sense something.......uh.......incestuous.
Maybe I'm weird. But then again....that would be interesting.
Maybe I'm weird. But then again....that would be interesting.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm a little confused--is Clint, Jeff and Lexi's stepfather all agents? (furrowing brow in puzzlement at the implications) Other than that, nicely done!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who would have thought--the Oracle and the Architect? I like it! I also like the way you introduce Lexi's histroy a little a time--makes me DEFINITELY want to keep reading!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You've updated! I loved the way you made Thomas Anderson Lexi's father AND wouldn't you know it, he's the one who killed Connor's father. What on earth will he do when he finds out??? Update soon!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting twist--I thought it would be the Smith we all know and love who would be doing the sketching, etc, but it turns out to be his son! Very interesting indeed....
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smith being able to play the piano? There are hidden qualities indeed behind that stoic exterior--hmm, I like it!
keep up the good work; an excellent beginning!
Akenaten
keep up the good work; an excellent beginning!
Akenaten