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I really like this story and I really want to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

that was so intense. the entire time I was reading it I sat statue still and would devour the next word.for the sake of /whatever you can think of/ update.

hurry up and post

Interesting. I look forward to seeing more. The format made the story somewhat difficult to read. The narrative was a bit confusing in places and the density of the type didn't help. Regardless, it is a cool piece and I hope you continue it, But, where is The Snarky One? Surely he hasn't found respectibility at this late date? He's got to be um... looking out for Evie and his nephew. Besides, we all know Johnathon has a thing for Ardeth. He wouldn't give up the chance to see him again.