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for Life on the High Seas

by basketballer

schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great!
person brooke
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF man it was getting good hurry with the next chapter
and e-mail me when you have more 10/10 yay!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story can't wait for the next chapter.

person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story
person Marie
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I think the chapters are a litle to short though. Please write more.
person pirate princess
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is really good, I like how you're letting Jack and Stella keep their distances a bit and they're not coming onto each other the whole time. Just something about the speaking: you might want them to be saying 'ye' instead of 'ya', like, 'Luv, ye can stay on me ship'. Also, I was wondering if you had a beta coz I noticed a couple of mistakes and I'd like to beta for you, coz this story is really good. Oh yeah, and I like how Will and Elizabeth are on the ship. I don't think there's anything else...except to say I hope you post again soon!
person ashley
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is too interesting to not finish it. it's suspenseful&keeps the reador on the edge of their seats by the time they reach the ending. jack sparrow&stella make a great couple&should end up together.
person Val-Hundra
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say I really do like this story so far. The storyline is very interesting. The chapters are a bit short, though, which is a slight downer but overall very nice work! I like the cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. Please, write more!