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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do like the story but why are the chappies so short. i dunno can u make them longer? I know how hard writing fanfics are, im a writer too, so I'm not going to rag on you. Whatever. Good story.
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dinney be hard on yerself gal. ;) you've got the 1700's carribean slang down to a t. good work keep going.
oh and p.s. no bras. just corsets and bodices ;)
oh and p.s. no bras. just corsets and bodices ;)
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...please continue!!! this is a good story and i'd love to read more.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I'm pretty sure you get alot of email. Mabie so much you don't have enough time to read them. I just wanted to say that I loved it and I look forwoard to reading the 5th chapter and every chapter after that I will print it out and read it when ever I can wich will be often.
Please auther keep writing thi book. It will keep my love for jack alive. I'm pretending I'm stella holding jack and and making long lasting sweet love to jack. I've had a crush on jonny dep since I was old enough to have a crush. Will Captain Jack sparo really fall inlove with stella and spend the rest of his life with her, or will he just use her while she's on th ship? Jack is such a terrible flirt. Will stella be the only one for him? please write more!
Please auther keep writing thi book. It will keep my love for jack alive. I'm pretending I'm stella holding jack and and making long lasting sweet love to jack. I've had a crush on jonny dep since I was old enough to have a crush. Will Captain Jack sparo really fall inlove with stella and spend the rest of his life with her, or will he just use her while she's on th ship? Jack is such a terrible flirt. Will stella be the only one for him? please write more!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know I think you're off to a good start. Stella has character and attitude! Can't wait to see more of your story....
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You shouldnt beg for reveiws. When people beg for reveiws it makes me not want to reveiw. Also you shouldn't say the only way you will update is to get reviews. You know only 10% of people who read stories reveiw? So just b/c people don't reveiw doesnt mean they don't like the story. I like the story though. Good Job. Maybe you could make the chapters a bit longer too?
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somebody's got to save her quickly! Jack doesn't allow that sort of stuff on the Black Pearl. She won't know that though so she will still be easy pickings for some shithead. More soon please.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love the story so far. It is coming along really nicely. Please update soon ! I wan to know what happens to Stella.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued, please continue to post!?!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...and just when it started to get truly intriguing. Please update soon!