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your story is so good, I hope you make it past your writers block and update soon!

Another unfinished fiction..thank you.

R

This is an amazing story. You handle the characters beautifully and your originals are brilliant. Looking forward to your next update!!

I love your story. You are a truly gifted writer. I love how you make Sarah she is seductive and bold,yet she still has an innocent quaility.
Lord Zekial is one seductive lord that I wouldn't mind wishing myself away for. He seems to have feelings for Sarah. I love how Erotic your story is. This is truly one of the best stories Of the Labyrinth. Please Update.
Your Adoring Fan,
~Luna~

I just wanted you to know that you are a gifted writer. Your story is erotic, well-written, and has a plot that keeps the reader wanting more. You managed to write a story that satifies the need for sex and the need for a plot at the same time, that's a gift. You give us enough sex right off the bat to satisfy us, and you have enough of a plot for us to keep reading. I hate it when I want to read a story with sex in it, but there's no sex till the end, but I hate it when I read a story by someone with writing talent, that puts sex in at the beginning, but makes it a one-shot. Too many authors with the talent for writing sex scenes keep it to a one-shot, but the others have so many chapters that it takes too long to get to the sex. I've never read a story that had so many chapters, mind-blowing sex scenes and enough action in every chapter to make each chapter a treasure. I also hate reading stories that aren't finished. I usually make it a point to only read stories that were finished. However, you title made me curious. And your first chapter had me addicted. I check for an update almost everyday. Most authors don't update for a long time, one reason I quit reading works in progress. You update often enough to keep me coming back, and that is most impressive. Have you ever considered writing an original novel?

I beg for more of this.

Amazing writing combined with innovative ideas is not something you come across very often. I eagerly await the next chapter.

I will give you a big hug if you update soon. I love this story.

Why was Sarah consuming an ANTI-CONTRACEPTIVE potion? "Anti" is a Greek root for "against," or "opposing." "CONTRA" is a Latin root for "against" or "opposing," as well. and "-CEPTIVE" goes back to conception. So why is she taking something that will is opposed to her preventing a pregnancy? It seems to me that a courtesan might want to avoid a pregancy, unless of course that courtesan was Catholic.

Hi!

Wow, so many new chapters since last I checked ... *starry eyes* You get a better review as soon as I've read them.
However, I noticed your repeated plea for someone to explain the italics. It's rather easy. To start them you type and to stop them . Just like every other html command.
And if that doesn't work, someone has changed the system. *glances around suspiciously*

Okay, stupid aff accepts html commands in the reviews as well. *grumbles* I'll try again.
It's < i > to start them and < / i > to stop them. Without the spaces in between!!