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Keep going! I'm really enjoying the fic! The orphanage was the perfect touch. The plot is ingenious and Zekial is absolutely wonderful! I love this story! Update soon, please!!!

I absolutly LOVE this story!!! I know you just updated, but PLEASE do so again soon!!!

Wow! This is great - please please please post the rest!!!

oooh please hurry and update! loving your fan fic and i cannot wait to see what happens when Sarah and Jareth see eachother.

Ah, someone has been watching Dangerous Beauty! Some of the rhythym of your diagloue betrayed that in the first chpater, before i even saw what prefaced the second chapter. i am interested to see how you use this particular material in this setting.

a VERY fine fic. Erotic, but well written and wonderful characters (a rare combination). I hope you continue!

An Great story I do so hope you continue

Very interesting plot and story....I cannot wait to read more...update soon

This is indeed a very good story. And quite original. Actually, if someone's reading these reviews (besides Lasski that is)- on fanfiction.net this story is posted till the eleventh chapter. The link is- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1549058/1/. It has not been updated for a very long time there, though. Lasski ensured me that the story was not abandoned and she was just truly busy with other things, but that was a really long time ago, so her plans about 'Courtesan' could have changed. I hope not- otherwise, why to post a story at a new site, if it's never going to be finished anyway?

And, that said, here's a suggestion to you Lasski- when you post the next chapter here you could write an author's note at the start or end of it and explain where the rest of the story can be found. Otherwise all the readers that are impatient to read the next chapters just have no clue about it. That is, if you haven't decided not to inform them about it on purpose :wink:.

This is very good so far. I like where you're headed. Please update again soon.