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for Still Entwined

by Dreamaria

person Alphawolf69
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A dark tale of love. A realistic portrayl, I think, of a Velma/Roxie relationship (if that's the right word for it) Great stuff.
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, wow. Wonnerful, dahlink!!! Your discription was great, and the hinting at the smut was just enough to entice but not enough to actually fulfill.... Gotta love that teasing. It fit well with the atmosphere of the movie and the characters were spot on. Would that there was more to it, ne? But it doesnt really -need- it so yeah. Still great as a stand alone piece.

Sorry. Im running on about three hours of sleep. I dont get much more constructive than that at this point. Keep up the great work.

Much Luv,
Nata