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I could strangle the doctor with his own intestines... Dammit, and i really liked the old coot until the last bit there! Hope you finish this story someday soon, it's really great!

PLEASE post more of this?!

Waiii! I just realized that this isn't finished....is it? It can't be finished. ;_;
I know this is an old story, but you should finish it. Because it's awesome and makes me squee at times. XD

Pretty awesome story! :D But awwwww where's more? ;C

Brill story, loved it, hope you finish it, would really like to see where it goes in the end.

x x The Hunted Lion x x

I know I read this a while ago , but not sure if I reviewed..if not then shame on me. This is a wonderfully written pairing, with the characters sounding very much as they should, and Riddick teasing Vaako is priceless !!!

I love how you tied in the orginal movie and brought back the beasties, I love the Hellhounds getting the chance to fight and have fun too. Vaako losing it is very realistic. !!!!!

I liked how you portrayed the characters :D
How Vaako is silent and totally oblivious to his charms, how Riddick is predatory, a pure alpha, and takes what he wants, and how Dame Vaako is smart and cunning and a total snake ;D

You describe things well, but somehow it feels that you rush with your writing style. I have no idea where I get that notion, but something about it bugs me.

One of the descriptions that I loved is the description you used on the Vaako's contrasting skin tones - one worsipped by the sun, the other caressed by the moon. That was beautiful :)

There were a few amusing thoughts, one was Riddick's answer to one of the soldiers, that Riddick decides when they deserve death, be it untimely or not, and the other one was if Riddick should kill Dame Vaako in order to get Vaako x) I vote yes!

And you brought the Hellhounds in!!! WOOT!! I adore the hellhounds and that scene where one was sniffing and nipping on Vaako's neck was awsome :D I also loved Vaako's reaction to the hellhound, how he just subsided :)

Now, I must go read the other chapters ^-^

Well, I have to say that I haven't a plot twist like this conserning Riddick o.0 And what a plot twist it was. Simply brilliant!

It made me sad, that Riddick wasn't smart enough to know Vaako wouldn't betray him, and that Riddick just left him doomed on the pitch black planet.
It took me a while to let go of my hope that Riddick would change his mind, but luckily you didn't fail me and made Aereon involved in things.
It makes me think that everything will be aright if I just continue reading ^-^

Oh, my heart aches for Vaako...

Well, at least the bitch is gone and Riddick is on his way, all remorseful and nice...right?!

Thank goodness I didn't start reading this fic when you started writing. My heart wouldn't be able to take the exitement.