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for Darkness Leads the Way

by Chaosdreamer

person Biokinetic
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YesyesYES! I love how this focuses on Vaako and the drama never seems to cease and the twists and emotions..God the emotions are so strong. I can't wait for your next chapter, and by the way this is Aubrey from ff.net :XDDDDD
Im the one who's your self proclaimed number one fan with the farfie/schu/ken fics. Im still obsessed with those, but I figured you had lost interest in that genre so I decided not to press about that anymore. Strangely enough, I've gone from Weiss Kruez as well and am now writing fanfics on Pitch Black ((I have one at my house, this is my username Im just not logged in)) Thankyou soooo much for updating so quickly and they're such wonderful updates but Im going to stubbornly plead with you that you update again soon because I must must MUST see how Vaako reacts to Riddick and all that jazz.
person scyllablue
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Great chapter, with plenty of Vaako owies. I liked him running, refusing to give up till the end. Hope you make Riddick work, grovel and beg for Vaako's affections. The doctor seemed a little flippant to the scary Lord Marshall, but good interjection of the Necromongers thinking of Vaako as a lesson. How will they treat Vaako from here out?
person DarkQueen
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the hellhounds in the movie but it showed so little of them. I like how you put them in the story as like a pack to riddick. Can't wait to read more. PLease update soon.
person keyonnamc
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the update, especially the hellhounds, amazing creatures. Oh and I love how you gave us an in-depth look into one of the creatures thoughts. I hope they find Vaako before he goes completely crazy or worst die.

Riddick has some serious ass-kissing to do if Vaako survives. I can’t want for the next chapter.
person CC
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. You have the occaisional typo and sometimes your tenses are off, but overall very cool. I am looking forward to more.
person keyonnamc
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupidity is right, dame he was stupid. I hope Vaako can get pass this traumatic experience. I love the part when Vaako knees Riddick in groin.*hehehee* Riddick definitely deserved more pain than that. I also feel bad for Riddick, but every action has a consequence. Awesome update.
Keep it coming….*_*
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person Tina
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this chapter so glad that you decided to write it ,hope it lasts a little while and that they reunite soon!!!
person deathscyth70
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving what you got here. Maybe you could have said when Riddick got the hounds. That's not all that important though. I hope you keep this up.
person scyllablue
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! -happy dance- So glad the hellhounds got to munch some beasties! I also liked your giving some of the other Necromongers names and personalities so Vaako isn't alone in having emotions. Yummy Vaako angst as well. I look forward to very few stories to update and yours is one of them. Thank you!
person Kat
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! Another Chapter, what a perfect way to end the week! But I'm still on pins and needles waiting for Vaako to be found. Not to be a nag or anything, but soon please? Thank you again.
Kat