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Oh my goodness, how could you leave us like that?!? I am so glad you updated this story and this is a clever tie-in! Are the big beasties from Crematoria going to get to go hunting? Nice angst and am looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this story. A real good update...really didn't expect that to happen.
I was hilarious to see Dame Vaako loose her mind.

I hope Riddick gets to Vaako in time to save him, from a undeserved death. I hope Riddick will everything to make it up to Vaako for doubting his loyalty.
Keep the updates coming....

oooo*shiver*is it hot in here to anybody else?

Great beginning to your fic! I concur with an earlier review...simply smashing! Nice work on dialogue, plot, structure, and usage. Hope to see the 2nd part soon...

Absolutely great, where's the next chapter?

I would really like for you to update your story! Very interesting!

Woah, that was great. I like the story and the plot was realistic, as were (awesomely!) the characters. The dialouge was smashing and the descriptions were key. The story flowed wonderfully and kept my interest piqued. You have a great talent in writing and I truly hope that you continue this story! I'm addicted. When I first saw the movie I was like 'holy hell someone's gotta write a slash fic with those two!', but I couldn't find any. Alas! But now there's this, and it's rocking my world. I love your story and seriously can't wait for the next chapter of it! Hope you post it soon, good luck writing it --not that you need it. Hell after reading this dude I'm sure you could do it blindfolded . . . which actually might be quite difficult considering the possibilty of a typo . . . anyways! *grins* Loved your work, the characters were brilliant. I just love Vaako, his cluelessness is so fetching. *grin* I just find his character to be so adorable. Ooooh I'd love to see a possessive Riddick. Mmmm.

Er, anyways great work with the story, looking forward to seeing more of your work in the near future mate! *grins* *glomps author* *waves*

Icy

love it! update soon!

You did a really good job on this fic. I hope you are going to do more of Riddick and Vaako.

Nice! Do please continue as there is just not enough Riddick/Vaako! The only confusion was the stressed words, I think, surrounded or followed by Ks? keep up the good work!