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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eep!
At chapter four things are getting exiting! It's interesting to follow Vaako's tracks through the eyes of another :)
I wonder, will Vaako be awake when they find him, scared shitless, or will he wake safe and traumatized in Riddick's bed?
At chapter four things are getting exiting! It's interesting to follow Vaako's tracks through the eyes of another :)
I wonder, will Vaako be awake when they find him, scared shitless, or will he wake safe and traumatized in Riddick's bed?
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my my my... I'm proud of Vaako ^-^ He fought damn well even while injured. And his knee in Riddick's groin made me snicker X)
I'm also scared for Vaako. When he wakes, it won't be all sunshine and rainbows immediately for him.
And even though I sympathise for Riddick, I say he get's what's comming to him - Vaako's disstrust.
In the beginning and the middle, I was bouncing in my seat, too nervous and caught up to sit still. I fear I'm starting to get too old for all this exitement (..never mind that I'm only twenty xD).
Thank you, for not being cruel and just hacking the chapter up in half and leaving us hanghing. I appreciate thay you lead us to calm harbor after the storm :)
I'm also scared for Vaako. When he wakes, it won't be all sunshine and rainbows immediately for him.
And even though I sympathise for Riddick, I say he get's what's comming to him - Vaako's disstrust.
In the beginning and the middle, I was bouncing in my seat, too nervous and caught up to sit still. I fear I'm starting to get too old for all this exitement (..never mind that I'm only twenty xD).
Thank you, for not being cruel and just hacking the chapter up in half and leaving us hanghing. I appreciate thay you lead us to calm harbor after the storm :)
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the ending of chapter six made my heart ache. In a good way ;D
It was just so beautiful...:) And true. Together they can survive everything.
Pretty, pretty, pretty chappie...
MUST READ MORE!
It was just so beautiful...:) And true. Together they can survive everything.
Pretty, pretty, pretty chappie...
MUST READ MORE!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO, we do not love cliffhangers!!!! >_<
...nice build up, by the way. I also loved the hellhound trap.
Now I must go read the next part instead of torturing myself.
...nice build up, by the way. I also loved the hellhound trap.
Now I must go read the next part instead of torturing myself.
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter eight's beginning was sweet and it made me squee ^.^
The middle part made me melt in to a happy puddle of goo.... You write good smut ;D
The ending... Was a bucketfull of cold water poured on my unsuspecting neck.
...I think I'm not brave enough to read the last already written chapter and be left hanghing, so I will just skip merrily away now and come back later ;D
The middle part made me melt in to a happy puddle of goo.... You write good smut ;D
The ending... Was a bucketfull of cold water poured on my unsuspecting neck.
...I think I'm not brave enough to read the last already written chapter and be left hanghing, so I will just skip merrily away now and come back later ;D
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was one of the most intense fic's I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
I love how you killed Daame Vaako she was an uber-bitch.
I hope you update soon I'm dying to know what happens with this new breed of creature you have intorduced.
I really hope that Vaako and Riddick have more hot steamy sex
Niiko
I love how you killed Daame Vaako she was an uber-bitch.
I hope you update soon I'm dying to know what happens with this new breed of creature you have intorduced.
I really hope that Vaako and Riddick have more hot steamy sex
Niiko
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome and interesting that I'm reading it all over again man.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*moans* i just read the entire thing and it took me just about 70 minutes, ive come to the conclusion of that i am addicted and that you need to feed my craving. more please. i absalutely LOVE it it. could you email me hwne you update? thnak you!!
extraho_606@hotmail.com
extraho_606@hotmail.com
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read some more hope to see an update in the near future =)
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Thank you for a great read. I friended you at LJ and also looked at your journal in hopes of finding a link to more of this story or others you have written, but you don't have them listed or links. Hope to see more of your great writings in the future.