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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(after watching finding nemo 4 times on Thanksgiving with little cousins)
just keep writing. just keep writing. just keep writing, writing, writing. you've got to write more. yes, write more.
cause if you don't i'll dress yo up as a fish and send you to Darla. or maybe i'll drop you on a peir infront of a bunch of seagulls who keep saying, "mine. mine." (PS they're my favorite characters) seriously, write some more man, i'm on the edge of my seat here.
just keep writing. just keep writing. just keep writing, writing, writing. you've got to write more. yes, write more.
cause if you don't i'll dress yo up as a fish and send you to Darla. or maybe i'll drop you on a peir infront of a bunch of seagulls who keep saying, "mine. mine." (PS they're my favorite characters) seriously, write some more man, i'm on the edge of my seat here.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!! Can't wait to read the next chapter. Loved how you have written
Riddick and Vaako. Nice on the hellhound bit as well. Can;t wait to see how
you explain how the creature got on the ship.
Alyfox
Riddick and Vaako. Nice on the hellhound bit as well. Can;t wait to see how
you explain how the creature got on the ship.
Alyfox
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, update soon, this story is getting good.... I feel truly tormented since
I am getting into this story and checking everyday since chapter 8 was put up....
I am getting into this story and checking everyday since chapter 8 was put up....
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so amazing, i look forward to the update. Woohoo!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah, really great chapter. Amazing, love the riddick/vaako action. Please continue soon, you're now one of my favorite authors.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was finally able to read the new updates. good. very good. too perfect. you got the whole post tramatic stress thing down perfectly from the defensive behavior to how the fear manifested itself. i must worship your ability to write as well as your knowlege of the human phychy. riddick new exactly how to handle poor Vaako's distress but you managed to make the process real and not an instant recovery.miracolus. i hate it when people make everything unkydory after dramatic events. its sooo... fake.
again i love your use of the hell hounds. i wondered how they moved around the ship with out terrifying every one. after all, animals like that need exercise. on a side note i would love to see slasher (the name of the hell hound riddick befriended. this i learned fom the book. yes there is a book.) do some consoling of his own towards his master's mate. how about, after an incounter with the beast.
oh, and about the beast being on the ship. too cool. suspenceful. i bow before your genious. how did it get on? are there more? what will the necros do?
please, update soon. but don't rush yourself. good writing takes time.
again i love your use of the hell hounds. i wondered how they moved around the ship with out terrifying every one. after all, animals like that need exercise. on a side note i would love to see slasher (the name of the hell hound riddick befriended. this i learned fom the book. yes there is a book.) do some consoling of his own towards his master's mate. how about, after an incounter with the beast.
oh, and about the beast being on the ship. too cool. suspenceful. i bow before your genious. how did it get on? are there more? what will the necros do?
please, update soon. but don't rush yourself. good writing takes time.
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
coooooolll....!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waited forever for update. It was worth the wait. awesome. i love this story. please update again soon. I can't believe u've got one of them on the ship!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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love you love you love you llooooove yyooouuuuu.
2 updates in one day, God (reaches uot and pulls you into big bear hug) thank you thank you thank you thank you i'm ssssooooooooo happy. (notices your blue face and ends hug with an apology) i will give ab official review when i can read the chappies. unortunally i can't at the moment.
love you love you love you llooooove yyooouuuuu.
2 updates in one day, God (reaches uot and pulls you into big bear hug) thank you thank you thank you thank you i'm ssssooooooooo happy. (notices your blue face and ends hug with an apology) i will give ab official review when i can read the chappies. unortunally i can't at the moment.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hewo!This is Aubrey again, you update you updated you update so happy happy happy!!
^_^;;;Sorry there, so excited and happy, especially when i got the email from you. Thankyou for updating I was so afraid that you had forgotten and ...yeah...thankyou.!
^_^;;;Sorry there, so excited and happy, especially when i got the email from you. Thankyou for updating I was so afraid that you had forgotten and ...yeah...thankyou.!