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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please? Soon?! The cliffhanger has caught us right at the good party and I'm dieing here for the next chapter! Riddick is going to have to do some serious butt kissing (among kissing some other things) to make up with Vaako. You're just getting to the kiss and make up scene and the suspense is killing me! So for the sake of my nerves update soon PLEASE!
Thank you
Thank you
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, esp. the beast's POV.Please continue
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deathly:YAY! 2 chapters while we were gone. Lots of Angst! *Hugs Riddick and Vaako* ^_^ I'm hyper today and they both needed a hug. And I was happy when you gave some of the soldiers names, and you were very describtive about everything. Then when you put the beast's POV, that was really good.
Deathness:*Stares at Deathly* Freaky, anyway. Sorry we left for so long, had to do somethings. The way you did the medics, you didn't make them all emotionless. Poor Vaakie, I hope his mind makes it through all this pain and update soon!
Deathly:Yuppers, or I'll come hunt ya down! ^^ Lol
Deathness:*Stares at Deathly* Freaky, anyway. Sorry we left for so long, had to do somethings. The way you did the medics, you didn't make them all emotionless. Poor Vaakie, I hope his mind makes it through all this pain and update soon!
Deathly:Yuppers, or I'll come hunt ya down! ^^ Lol
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad u updated this story. i love it. please update again soon!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!
I just posted my review at 'The Wonderful World Of Makebelieve' but I thought what the heck, I'll just review once more.
This story is really great and I am glad that you decided to not just write an epilogue but to lengthen the whole thing. I definitely like the direction this is going and I absolutely adore the pairing Riddick/Vaako. There can never be enough fanfiction featuring these two guys. ;)
Congrats to the five finished chapters and please keep up the great work. We readers are eager to find out what is going to happen next.
Once more, thank you!
Simarillion
I just posted my review at 'The Wonderful World Of Makebelieve' but I thought what the heck, I'll just review once more.
This story is really great and I am glad that you decided to not just write an epilogue but to lengthen the whole thing. I definitely like the direction this is going and I absolutely adore the pairing Riddick/Vaako. There can never be enough fanfiction featuring these two guys. ;)
Congrats to the five finished chapters and please keep up the great work. We readers are eager to find out what is going to happen next.
Once more, thank you!
Simarillion
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, please
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really happy riddick found vaako.i really want to know what going to happen when vaako wake up.so please update soon.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Riddick saved him. lol. I hope Vaako is ok. Mind probs suck. Please update soon! ^_~
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Thank you! Another Chapter. It was great! The character development is wonderful! I love the way you manage to pull away the layers to show the people underneath. Now I just have to be patient for the next chapter.
Kat
Kat
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done chapters so far! Waiting for updates. Surely Riddick will have to kiss his Vaako many many times to make everything better:-) Please continue your story. I liked it very much indeed!