rate_review Reviews

You created a serial killer, I'm almost scared! Haha, well, I hope he's a good read. I live close to Arlington, think I'll lock my doors tonight.

=( Serial killers should just stay calm, that's the only mistake they can make. He just got himself caught. Wish he would have been around longer... Well, he's not exactly caught yet, so maybe the cops will slip up too...

I can't wait to see what Dr. Lector does to this creep. You've got me totally hooked!

yo, I was about to review on FF.net til' you told me you moved here. anyway great story and hope you udate soon.

I like your train of thought so far. {I'm on chapter two...}
just a few suggestions though, try and be more descriptive with your sceanes and chericter apperances what they are feeling and thinking. Ido not know about others but when ni read i try to find some part of a chericter that I can relate to. for me this makes the stories plot seem more real and enjoyable. this is NOt a flame! *shiver* I hate those. but i love this thus far. if you would like I could help you to write a more descriptive virsion. I only offer because i despise when readers review and critisize w/o offering to help fix what they think needs to be tweeked.

HEY!!! how can you just stop the story there?!? please email me when you update??