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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice... I went looking to see if any other authors shared my name and found this little gem... My girlfriend will squeal when she reads it...
And as for ignoring the end of the movie-
"I reject your reality and substitute my own."
It should have ended more like your story...
And as for ignoring the end of the movie-
"I reject your reality and substitute my own."
It should have ended more like your story...
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved it. The concept was plausible, especially if based on the movie. I have to totally agree about her face, Emmy did make it look likes she was having an orgasm when she was around the Phantom (Like that's real hard to do being around Gerard Butler!) Especially in the part when Gerry spins her around and runs his hands over her and grabs her hand to press up against his face. "Floating, falling...Sweet intoxication...touch me...trust me...savor each sensation." But I always loved that scene, they looked hot in it. Bravo, and kudos to you for this wonderful one-shot!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool. =^.^= "Maestro!" I loved that. Can't believe there's only two Phantom fics. And they're both one-shots! But, oh well. This was pretty good. *thumbs up*
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly loved it.
Sep./20/2006
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. . . it was very tastefull. You really seemed to grasp Erik's(that's the phantom's name in the novel) emotions. I have a question though, was I the only one who thought that Christine should have had a neon flashing sign spelling out "RAPE ME" when she goes down into the Phantom's "lair"? I mean come on. She's just asking for it going down alone with some guy into his little island of a home in a skimpy little nightgown none the less. I don't know. If you would e-mail your response to me I'd be much ablidged. I'm really curious if anyone else thought this as well.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Excellent in many ways. I always thought she should have chosen the Phantom over that stupid rich boy. Great work.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Excellent in many ways. I always thought she should have chosen the Phantom over that stupid rich boy. Great work.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i like this ending to it a lot better hehehehe
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, wow...this story's amazing...it was exactly what I was looking for. It totally made up for the original's heartbreaking end...this is how it should've been.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"She could only cry out her release in wonder, a mindless sound that longed to name her lover but lacked the word." is no work of cliche! Mazel Tov! I did enjoy your story.