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for My Deepest Apologies, Master

by Sapphirexkat2

schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! it doesnt have to bee soon ...but im begging u..this is such a good beginning..and everything is right and in place..i really cant wait to see what happens next..you are such an amazing writer..i love all of your stories..anyways..keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to your next chapter. take care 8D
person wtr
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update? !
person Inu
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Obi-Wan is pretty much in character, I like that. There's only the padawon thing. I'm quite sure the spelling is padawan.
person Mystik
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw...this is so sweet! And i really want to see the rest! I caught my attention! Ja ne!
person Leonhart
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I seriously can't wait for the next chapiter, this is goooooood stuff <3
person MistressD
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sweet that I have gone into a diabetic coma. X3 Pleeeeease update soon!!
person c45
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, there could be no action in the entire story and it'd still be worth reading, if the whole thing is as good as your first chapter. Oh please oh please oh please do continue-- this is wonderful.
person cat
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! you need to update soon man... you've got a great plot goin' on here.

Cat
person AxuGirl83
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´m speechless. This so far one of the best stories i have ever read!! This is so great!
i also write these kind of stories but in finish..as you can see i can´t write so good in english:).
Keep up the good work!!
person charity
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more pleeeeeeease keep writing