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This a way cool story, I like the OC idea and I am glad that you didn't put Padme in it, I think it's great and has alot of potential i give it five Stars all the way

Dude! You updated! WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ALREADY HAD THE CHAPTER TYPED UP?!?!?!?!?! What were you thinking? Do you think that its fun to torture poor innocent readers? Hmmm? Anyways... Sion's reaction makes me sad! They will get together right? Or are you just here to tease us?
grrr...
*You WILL updte soon*
Lenore Raven

that is so good! I love your story. your original character is so good...i mean he actually has a personality..hes not like those stupid typical oc's that seem to come out of nowhere with no plot and no story just stupid smut. your story is so awesome! loveitloveitloveit. you need to update man! this is just so...good. I'm at a loss for words i really am.

keep it up!
~~Cat

EEK! You updated! You made my day! Awe, I *heart* Sion. He's so adorable! Finally Anakin makes a move! Yay! BUT YOU GAVE ME A CLIFF HANGER! *imitating Darth Varder from Episode III* "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Ok so this means that you must update soon! *steals jedi wave* You WILL listen to Elys. You WILL update."
thanks!
Lenore Raven

GAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints* yay!!!!!!!!!! you updated soon!!!! *happy dance* but it was waaaaaayyyyyyy to short! i want more! *stomps foot* you must update again and very very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does the little jedi hand wave thingy that she did last time* "You will update soon." heehee great story! can't wait to read more! *is hoping for a really hot lemon* heehee yummy! ^_~

*waves hand slightly* "You will update this story soon." *looks at you* ... ... ... ..........................................
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!?????????? i love this story!!!!!!

Love it! Absolutely love it! You write very well; I got a good feel for you character's personality, the plot was clearly defined and easy to follow and you made me want to read more. Excellent! I can't wait to see what happens between Sion and Anakin! I absolutely adore Sion! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Lenore Raven