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WOW!!! a quick update!! XD ***hurrey***

yes, you did give me a few more surprises with this chapter!! god, I can't believe those ungrateful bastards would try to kill Alexis and Serena, especially after what they went through for them! I'm possitive that you are not going to be that cruel and let them succeed, yes?? _BUT_ it's not as surprise as OLYMPIAS!!!! haha you really caught me off guard... now, I'm dying to know what she is upto ^^;;

Alexander is lucky to have a forgiving and understanding lover like Heph, all he need to do now is GROW UP finally!! sigh.. arrogant and jealousy brat~ *shake her head*

OK thanx so much for an awesome update, have a great weekend!! *hugs*

Oh what a read, try reading this one from chapter 1 up to this point, almost makes one melt on their seat.

Keep up the great work, needless to say I will be watching for more updates to this one as it's really put a good angsty twist to an old story.

Awesome update. I like how Heph is caring for Alexis and how domesticated and comfortable he is with Serena....and he was bedding her often too...
I could understand Alexander's anger at Heph getting so much sex...and from a woman, and, giving him none....no attention.....nothing!!!!! *LOL*

Alexander behaviour is so amusing, and pathetic...why can't he just share his feelings and let Heph know that he feels lonely and needs his attention too, and better still join with him and the winged ones as they bond and create a better relationship.

I never liked Parmenion nor Philotas, and although I could understand their fears, Alexis and his sister help them. I hope that their plan backfire big time....that Bagoas warns them or Alexander of the evil plans.

Looking forward to an update soon. Have a great weekend.

hi dear~ thx for the nice words, I'm glad to be back as well *hugs*
wow wow this chapter is one of the best! I'm glad they made it out of the tomb without too many death!
but hey! what a twist!!! I didn't expect those ghosts to be a savior, great job darling!! I LOVE surprise! =)
now, I hope Alexis will get well soon! and talk some sense or teach Alexander a lesson..sigh! the arrogant brat really need to grow up!!! -.-

Most interesting and exciting update. I am happy that Heph and Alexis are well and that the insane queen is dead. I hope that that is the fate of all the evil winged creatures.

I am sure that "pure unselfish love" could protect one from the hatred of evil.... as it prove to protect Heph and his friends from the undead. Little did Alexander know that his love for Heph saved his life.

Update soon.

I keep checking this story for new chapters almost everyday, what can I say I am addicted. Great story line, love the suspense. I'm going through painful withdraws waiting to see what will happen next. I hope you will update soon, and you have a wicked sense of humor in your story. I just love it, wish I had your gift for writing.

I read the whole thing in one go. I like your Incubus/Succubus incarnations. They remind me very much of Anne Bishop's Dark Jewels stories and yet are wholly original. Perhaps when Alexis/Serena are done here they can move onto to a new historical environment - I suggest you write it wholly offline and only marginally slashy. This premise is highly marketable in the present publishing environment. Even if you only write a novelette, combined with two other supernatural/otherworldly tales, it would be prime material. Kudos I heap upon you. Your grammar and spelling need some work, but the plot... MY GOD! The PLOT! It is a marvel.
PeeK

Nights of Babylon
I love this story, I keep checking for updates I really hope you will get the chance to complete it. It would be shame if you did not. Keep up the good work.
Jorya

Hi, I just read your story from chapter 1-24 in two days. I love it very much and hope you will continue this soon. I am really curious what will happen next. Thanks for sharing a fantastic angst and romantic work.

Crack! My God! This story is my CRACK! Update sooooon! I beg you on my knees! You are an awsome writter and this story is my CRACK!