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Oh!! This chapter really worth waiting!! so exciting that I didn't know I could hold my breath that long! Alexis did prove his genuineness and love toward Hephaistion, he is a real hero!!! XD hope none of them hurt that bad and... hmm did I forget something? -"- O-oh what about the arrogant king? Ha I almost forgot that he's also the one who claim to love Hephaistion as much but do nothing except bringing in more trouble -__- sometimes, I couldn't help but wish him to learn the hardest way!! *evil grin* =p

A wonderful update with an exciting and very daring rescue.
Love how Alexis got rid of his enemies and how his deep love for Heph gave him the strength to save him from the dreadful pool.
Hope you update soon.

argh! Please hurry and update!
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A wonderful and exciting chapter. I love everything about it...and although things look a bit bleak, my Macedonians are doing quite well, especially Cleitas and Cassander...good strategy. Well, hope that Heph and Alexander get out of their predicament soon.

Looking forward to another update quite soon.

A wonderful and very exciting update.

At least they have a chance to live, a small one but one nevertheless.

Damn Alexander's mouth, he is so full of it sometimes and after condemning fifty men to die before,
he just wouldn't learn. At least this time he listened to Heph and the others.

Glad that Alexis and his sis went back and found Nearchus and the others... hope they get out without further deaths.

And Heph was doing really well, despite his pain and dark and dangerous surroundings and you let him fall...but I guess that Alexis will catch him...Right!!!!!.

Again, great update..looking forward to another soon....really, really soon.

BTW, I like this Hide and Seek Game...

A great update. Exciting and dramatic. Alexander's pride would always be his downfall. More than fifty soldiers died horribly for no reason...but his stubborn pride and vanity, fighting an enemy he didn't understand, who would murder their own, in their environment: unknown, enclosed, dark and dangerous, and he wouldn't listen to reason.

Their only hope now is Alexis and his sister.

Well done. Looking forward to a quicker update.

ahh! no cliffhanger i ahve to know what happens next!

i'm addicted to your story! i read from chapter 1 to like 13 all at one time but then i realized how late it was and i had to go to bed. i just finished chapter 20 and i luv it! i love your characters, i love everything about it please continue! update soon!!!

Like this chapter. Really nice update. Alexander should really listen to reason sometimes..but it looks like exciting times ahead...as long as my Heph don't get hurt.
Looking forward to more soon.

Well, you are a junior Barrister. Interesting work.

I guess you will have a huge work load and real life is going to be tough sometimes. Therefore, it is wonderful that you still have time to update...I guess you also use fic to unwind..right?????????

Have a great week...update when you can.