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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting update. I hope that as Alexis and the beast Tessos falls to their death, that Alexis turn and Tessos is slammed the earth and obliterated, becoming a blood spot. It is also wonderful that Alexander finally remembered how much he love Heph...and that he can't live without him. My only regret is that Alexis didn't kill the bitch queen, who may still cause trouble.
Update soon.
Update soon.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! Hephaistion is already in the hands of the real evil~!!!!!!!!! *SCREAM in terror*
What's going to happen to him!? Who is going to help him!? What is Tessos going to do with him!?
oh my god! oh my god! what I feared the most became true! hephaistion is in real danger now!!!!
I can only put my hope with Alexis as he is the only one capable of doing so (no offend to you, Alexander but the trust is still there, you can't fly!!) oh! but how is he going to get rid of the bitch quick enough!!! *panic >.<*
Aww~~ such a cliff hanging you left us here, kruemel!!!! please update soooooooooooooooon!!!!!
What's going to happen to him!? Who is going to help him!? What is Tessos going to do with him!?
oh my god! oh my god! what I feared the most became true! hephaistion is in real danger now!!!!
I can only put my hope with Alexis as he is the only one capable of doing so (no offend to you, Alexander but the trust is still there, you can't fly!!) oh! but how is he going to get rid of the bitch quick enough!!! *panic >.<*
Aww~~ such a cliff hanging you left us here, kruemel!!!! please update soooooooooooooooon!!!!!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a cruel cliff hanging you left us here, kruemel!!!!! Please do update sooooooooooooooooooooon!!!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, please update soon. I hope he gets rescued or someone kills both Tessos and the mother soon!!!!! Update soon, this stroy is really good!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very exciting. dramatic and fast-pased update.....filled with lots of action. I love it.
But you know if Alexander had not let his anger and pride ruled him, Tessos would be dead and Heph would not now be in danger. I hope that beast do not try to rape Heph as in his dream.
Just hope that Alexis killed his mother quick, and go and rescue my Heph.
Eagerly looking forward to your next update and very soon!!!
But you know if Alexander had not let his anger and pride ruled him, Tessos would be dead and Heph would not now be in danger. I hope that beast do not try to rape Heph as in his dream.
Just hope that Alexis killed his mother quick, and go and rescue my Heph.
Eagerly looking forward to your next update and very soon!!!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful updates!!! Yes, love can make your rational part works ineffectively and jealousy can make you blind easily but that is what happen when you love someone.. it'd be so great if Alexis get to understand the feeling
Looking forward to the next chap =)
Looking forward to the next chap =)
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Like Heph jealousy over both Alexis and Alexander...and Alexander always tries to blame someone else for his incorrect behaviour...time he own up and behave nicely towards Heph.
Looking forward to a threesome.
Update soon.
Looking forward to a threesome.
Update soon.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice and erotic update. It shows how much Alexis trusts Heph that he took Serena to the palace to him in order to get help. I love Cleitus being told to go to bed. It was funny.
The sex was hot between Alexis and Alexander, although I felt somehow that Alexis was cheating on Heph...weird thought, isn't it? Are we going to have a threesome soon?
Update soon. BTW, I do hope that Serena gets better.
The sex was hot between Alexis and Alexander, although I felt somehow that Alexis was cheating on Heph...weird thought, isn't it? Are we going to have a threesome soon?
Update soon. BTW, I do hope that Serena gets better.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting. I'm so sorry that Serena was hurt. I hope that Alexis is able to get help.
Update soon.
Update soon.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*thumb up!!!* Great Update!! ^O^ I so like it that you make Alexander has some self-control, even though he still not that clear about the situation. Good job, Alexander!! you won't be able to win Heph back if you keep on being obstinate... now, I fear for tragedy since the time to choose between Alexander and Alexis is coming close, as the war already started and seemed to heat up, what is Heph going to do? and how are you, our dear kruelmel, going to end it?? -- ah!! so exciting!!!!!
Contrary to Alexis and Serena that you created so nicely, tessos and his mom including that priest really make me sick!! Oh!Serena, poor girl~~ hope you won't let her die just yet! besides, she didn't even have a taste of either Hephaistion or Alexander yet!! Tessos is a real heartless beast and demon, I'm shudder just thinking of what Tessos will do if he only knew about Heph...
Contrary to Alexis and Serena that you created so nicely, tessos and his mom including that priest really make me sick!! Oh!Serena, poor girl~~ hope you won't let her die just yet! besides, she didn't even have a taste of either Hephaistion or Alexander yet!! Tessos is a real heartless beast and demon, I'm shudder just thinking of what Tessos will do if he only knew about Heph...