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What an interesting and exciting chapter. Well, the demons has started the war and I look forward to the battle...I do hope that Heph, Alexis and Serena get through it without being harmed as they are the only ones who now have an interest in preserving both groups. The rough love play between the demons as well as Heph own play was hottt.

At last, Alexander is beginning to see the light where Heph and Alexis are concerned...or is he?

Wonderful update. Until tomorrow????

whoa~~ *blush* I haven't expect to see the scene between the three of them omg~ such a wonderful and HOT update!!! I've come to like Serena more and more, don't know why but I think she's kinda innocent.. you know, like a kid who just do or say whatever she feels like to but that's a charm.. well, in a strange way ^^;; and you're right! Alexander is more like a moron who doesn't seemed to think with his brain BUT I do love the fact that he at least express some care and love toward Hephaistion and show it to other companions that Heph is more important (at lease he did listen to Heph first!!)

...Alexis is the only grown up one around here! I can imagine him trying to deal with one arrogant and stuborn kid out there (alexander) while taking care of a clutching baby in his hand (heph) and a naughter girl (serena) oh! seemed like a hard work here =p

another great chapter!!! I love to see Alexander getting jealous but hate it when he put it as Hephaistion's false and get mad at him for doing exactly the same... I know he has the right as a king, he can has as many lovers as he wants but in doing so, he had to make up his mind and respect Hephaistion's right to do the same!! Especially after encounter Serena and been thinking about her, attracted by her.. he should as well understand what Hephaistion had to go through otherwise.. I'll be so sorry for Hephaistion and pray for him to choose Alexis over Alexander (oh! I really have to say you develope Alexis wonderfully that nobody seemed to find anything bad about him and can't help but love him!!.. great job!!! ^-^)... keep my finger crossed for your next update!!

Wonderful update.

Alexander is so self-centered and awefully silly in this chapter...and he would not listen.

If he loved Heph as much as he says, how could he subject him to such dirty and unbearable conditions in the darkened dungeon, even for a short time. I hope he sees the light soon.

Me again!!! The sex was sizzling...very, very hott.

aww this chapter is so good and kind of funny and very nice and etc etc

I feel so sorry for Heph, and I hope that Alexander do not get on like the selfish, jealous ass he could be because Heph was with Alexis. After all, he neglects Heph and look how he reacted when he heard Bagoas was hurt. And Cleitus is also getting on my royal nerves.

Hope that Alexis and Serena get through the war alright and unhurt, the others who want war could all die, expecially the Queen and Tessos.

Nice update.

See you tomorrow *smile*

hey! I really have to object!!! it's not boring at all!!! in contrast, I really think it's getting more and more exciting and interesting.. -> look at the number of readers and you will know how good it is ^_~

with Serena taking part and many people witness that Heph tried to help the 2 demons, I'm not sure where this story is going (which is good because where is the fun in reading a story that you guess, right?) I guess I will have to wait 'til Alexander awake.. I really hope he won't let Heph down over again, considering that he decided to come for Heph earlier, plus the fact that he did encounter Serena himself and still alive but well, Alexander (or beter say, our dear kruemel) can be hard to predict, eh?

Alexis and Heph are caught in the middle here.. whatever they decide to do seemed to be wrong to either their heart or their kind.. but at least Alexis has Serena, oh! I'm so empathy poor Heph!! he really has no one *sniff* hope whatever they come up with won't hurt Heph any further... haha now you know I'm a big fan of Heph ^^

Very exciting and dramatic!!! Both Heph and Alexis have important decisions to make to save their kind and I hope stay a war.

Tessos is always causing trouble and I really want both him and his mother to die, and peace to reign but I know it will not be easy.

I hope that Alexander realize that Heph was not commiting treason, when he allowed Alexis and Serena to escape, and that, in his renewed love for him, that he listen to Heph and let reason and wisdom reign. Alexander standing up with Heph now could go a great way to saving their relationship and to show Heph that he still values his views. The mere fact that he is still alive even after being with Selena should help him make a correct decision. ( I know that he fell asleep and thwart Serena plans to kill him but Alexander doesn't know this).

Looking forward to your next update.

This was a truly wonderful update. I like how Alexis allowed Heph to take him, encouraging him and introducing him to new feelings and actions. The offer was made more special since it was also done because Heph indicated that he was still hurt and couldn't perform in that way. The fact that a powerful being such as Alexis let Heph take him and love him in that way should go a long way to building Heph confidence and self-esteem in himself, and to making him a bit more dominant. I like how Alexis treat Heph with love, attention and devotion and how Heph is opening up to him. They do make a fine pair.

It was great how Bagoas dancing skills help him to evade Tessos and saved his life..........and it was also very amusing that Alexander drunkeness saved his life from being taken by Serena.

Overall, a very intereting and dramatic chapter.

I know that RL may impact on your updating but I do hope that you find it possible to update daily.