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for The Yankees Are Coming

by imaPseudonym

person nil
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredibly addictive, and I really hope you plan on continuing it. Jack seems a little out of character, in spite of the AU even, but it's no big.
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really really hope you finish this. i love this combo.
person Extraho
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is cute, please dont stop.
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this concept!!! please update soon!!!
person Sk
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Just wanted to tell you how great your story was!! I *love* me some Sparrington, but mixed with HP was a great idea!! So yeah, keep up the SUPERFLUOUS work!! (did I spell that right...??)
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I usually dont like Sparringtons--(Im rather attached to JackWill)--and I usually hate Hp fiction, so getting me to like this took dome talent!!!!
Please update soon...! You have a really neat writing style that draws you into the story very easily...and an American Jack is adorable....but Will in Hufflepuff? Poor Will. : )
Go on, love, get writing!
person AlchemistSeraph
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, cool story! Nicely written, few mistakes, really funny with the Sparrington thing. I can't wait to see more of it, as soon as you update. Oh, and if I may ask, where did you come up with the idea of fusing Hogwarts and PotC together? It's priceless humor...
person Emmy
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I’m so proud of you Fluffy, you kept the story going. And it ain’t half bad either, guess that would make it half good? But answer me this: Why on the face of God’s green earth did you choose plaid for the umbrella? Why? What possessed you? Is there some criminally insane physiatrist floating about putting useless and horribly thoughts into your mind? Plaid she says, oy! Keep up the good work, I want more chapters. I remember you saying something about Teddy in a Toga, but that’s all that flickers back.