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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm nearly crying... what an end! <3
in the past days i read some jack/will-stories, but in each one of it there was something that i missed. and i was near at the point saying i write a story myself. *lol*
but then a friend of mine told me about this story. and i'he read it for now... uhm... absout two hours? or two and a half? dunno... but it es sooooo amazing! after each chapter i was only 'awwwwww <3' and such things! *laugh*
you habe a beautiful view on the two men, they were exactly like the will and the jack i have in my head! X3 and then the night-szenes. oh god. so hot... if i'd bite fingernails, i wouldn't have some anymore! *gg* you have an amazing way to write and it was a pleasure to read every litte word of this story!
so thank you a lot for your work, you made me amazingly happy! ^__^
wish you all the best,
chiisu
in the past days i read some jack/will-stories, but in each one of it there was something that i missed. and i was near at the point saying i write a story myself. *lol*
but then a friend of mine told me about this story. and i'he read it for now... uhm... absout two hours? or two and a half? dunno... but it es sooooo amazing! after each chapter i was only 'awwwwww <3' and such things! *laugh*
you habe a beautiful view on the two men, they were exactly like the will and the jack i have in my head! X3 and then the night-szenes. oh god. so hot... if i'd bite fingernails, i wouldn't have some anymore! *gg* you have an amazing way to write and it was a pleasure to read every litte word of this story!
so thank you a lot for your work, you made me amazingly happy! ^__^
wish you all the best,
chiisu
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* wow...that makes me want to find MY boyfriend and try a little roleplaying....I'm not even kidding you....damn you're good at this stuff!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i must say that i really liked this story. i never liked slash stories but you have inspired me to write my own. i think that you well written the story and i think that you did capture jacks character very well. i just wanted to say good job and well done mate.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I love the detail.Very passionate story. I hope you write a second part.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty darn good. You kept it going for a long time, too...I have longevity problems when it comes to writing fanfiction. Kudos to you. :)
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored this entire story! I was laughing and crying right along with Will and Jack, who you captured character wise very well!! To say the least it's tough for me to decide if Elizabeth/Will is best, or if Jack/Elizabeth is better; needless to say, I much prefer to cut Elizabeth from the picture and pair Jack and Will together lol. ^.^ Although realisticaly we all know that it will never happen in the movies, which is why I adore fanfics SO much!
You did an amazing job with your story and I hope you write another Jack/Will(And if you already have and I'm behind, I will make sure to find and read it!) Keep up the great job, you're a fantastic author!!
XxJessXx
You did an amazing job with your story and I hope you write another Jack/Will(And if you already have and I'm behind, I will make sure to find and read it!) Keep up the great job, you're a fantastic author!!
XxJessXx
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was the best, most, plot I have ever seen in a slash fic. You're an excellent writer, usually I loose interest in long stories but I read this all the way through. The ending was kind of sappy but what the hell, I liked it. But it's 5:30 a.m. where I am so I must sleep. Tah!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what happend to Elizabeth? Did she not care what happend to Will? or Babosir? What about the pearl!? Love the romance though these two needed someone...Georgia has a port...where is goergia?(failed geography)
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, a few things
First of all, thank you SO much for updating, it's really appreciated. The sex was really good, but I fel like it was a bit predictable. I felt like the descriptions were a bit haphazard. Finally, I didn't feel that any of Jack or Will's personality came out. And Captain Jack Sparrow simply has too much dignity to all his boyfriend "Baby". Whelp? Sure. Love? Yes. William darling dearest? Eh, with a few bottles of rum. But baby? Ohhhhhh noooooooo. And WHAT's with all the crying? I am all for emo pirates, but that was a bit much. All in all, better in quality than most, but not the best either. I still enjoyed reading it.
First of all, thank you SO much for updating, it's really appreciated. The sex was really good, but I fel like it was a bit predictable. I felt like the descriptions were a bit haphazard. Finally, I didn't feel that any of Jack or Will's personality came out. And Captain Jack Sparrow simply has too much dignity to all his boyfriend "Baby". Whelp? Sure. Love? Yes. William darling dearest? Eh, with a few bottles of rum. But baby? Ohhhhhh noooooooo. And WHAT's with all the crying? I am all for emo pirates, but that was a bit much. All in all, better in quality than most, but not the best either. I still enjoyed reading it.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!
I loved reading it.
Will/Jack! OTP!
I loved reading it.
Will/Jack! OTP!