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Thank you all sooo much for your lovely reviews - they were so nice and encouraging (esp. the long one from Deluwiel, thank you a LOT!:)))) I don´t know what happened, but two reviews vanished yesterday. I did not delete them (why should I?) so I guess it is some technical problem. So if the ones who wrote the reviews read this here- I read your reviews and was very happy about them - don´t know where they disappeard to... :-(

Omg, that was wonderful. I stayed up till three am reading it. Couldn't stop. I applaud you.

I have read many, many stories of Will/Jack and I have also written a few, but I must say this is only the second one that has brought me to tears. The first time Will tells Jack he loves him, that really tugged at the heart strings. At the end of Chapter 11, I balled my eyes out. You really have a way with words there. That was just so sad. I never looked to see how many Chapters there were, I just kept reading, not wanting to know how much more there would be or if it was the end for them. Very well written. You captured the pain, the love, the lust, the glory, the sadness and happiness with such imagery and emotion. I could feel their pain and their tears and as I said it brought me to tears. When they cried, I cried. Happy and sad tears. The love scenes were very erotic and not smutty as some I have read. You kept it beautiful with meaning and the great visions you put in my head, well, let's just say Ooh la la!! This was one hell of an emotional roller coaster of a ride for me, and I enjoyed every minute of it.
Keep up the good work. I hope to read some more of your stories.
Thank you for keeping it real.

Deluwiel
xxxx

*tears* *snif* oh that was so...so...ah!!!!!!! great! I almost cried, almost but didn't! oh they are so sweet!!!!!!!!!!! god why can't they really be like that!? *shakes head* reality sucks ahahahaa

I've read up to the latest chapter of this fic and have a few comments to make. First of all I'd like to say this was a interesting experience for me to read 'cues I usually dont tend to read ficlets with whips, chains and spanking. Bondage isn't new for me, but still. It was pretty good actually, though I must admit the spanking wasn't all to my liking, or at least not the way it was writen. Secondly I'd like to say that I dont mean to be harsh in criticing you, but I'm sorry love; no matter what origion you have MEN DO NOT PRODUCE THEIR OWN LUBRICANT. I'm sorry, but unless both of them just happen to be insain genetic sports, there is no way Will's anal virginity could have been broken without severe pains in his rectal cavity to the point that he would more then likely attempt to beat jack horrible because he physically could not have gotten any pleasure out of that. Also, it would have taken Jack at least 10 minutes to sucessfully penedrate him scence he had no means to excellerate in him all by his cocks lonesome. Furthermore, I was very glad to see that you added lube and excersizing later on, but still... first time anal sex is pretty much impossible without lube @_@. Anyways, other then that I enjoyed reading your fic (though I am kinda pissy at some other small things in this story, but those are just my personal tweaks when it comes to relationships and how you portray them, they aren't physically inpossible so I wont add to my rant against you any more then I already have ^^""") and am still looking forward to your next chapter~<3!

love,
ze yasha of coco >> <<

Awwwwwww.....
I don`t know what to say. I love your story so much !!!!
Please, please, please write more !!!!!
There`s one thing I know for sure... this is the story that I will always remember....
^_^

This story just gets better and better as I continue reading. I've gotten to chapter eleven so far, and I have to tell you that it made me cry a little bit. Haha, maybe I'm just too sentimental, but it was beautifully written. Excellent job.

OMG Its so sappy.... but in a good way. I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. I know Jack and Will are a bit ooc, but you make it work. please update soon and help me keep my sanity >_<

Lisa

I'm so glad I found this again! I was so sad to see it disapear! Now I must catch up! I love your story! It's so cute!

I LOVE IT! Well so far I do, I have only read up to chapter 3 LOL But will and Jack are so sweet together. *Sigh* Why cant I meet two hot guys like that?