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person shayna
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, you have to continue it as soon as you can!!!! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I really liked reading this fic, and i know what it is like to find your work has gone when you have uploaded it once. I am so glad that you put it back up again and continued it.

I found it fun, sensual and in parts gripping and serious, but i do think that Jack and Will are the perfect pairing in fics - loved the sexual scenes and the whipping. Keep it up, girl.
person Jean
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story way back when and loved it! I'm so happy to see posting it again and adding to it!
Thank you!
person Kim
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first couple of chapters were a bit rough and I almost stopped reading but I kept going and am very glad I did. The story actually has feeling and emotion now instead of just sex and I love it more and more. Please keep writing.
person Littlest Coyote
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excelent! Time for the new chapter happy-dance. Good to see that Jack won't be stuck on land or stuck seperated from Will because of his fears. *hands over a cookie* Next chapter please!
person Miya Sparrow
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah no! I want to see what they'll do in the hotle room! like I don't know already ahahahah update please.
person Reb Riddle
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the sweetest thing i`v ever had the pleasure of reading it was beautiful you are a phenomenal writer ^__~ i am honerd to review such a amasing story
person Heather
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing!! dont review often so i dont really kno what to say but WOW. you had me from the get go. i hope apon hope that this isnt the end. please continue the adventures! *sigh* so great
person Miya Sparrow
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word, More!!!!!!!!!!!!...please
person Mahie
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please go on!!! This fic is just amazing! :) I'm so happy to have read it again. I thought I wouldn't find it anymore. LOL!
Jack/Will love forever!!!!!!! :))))