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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a hot piece of writing!!!!!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more poetry...nicely done
usually slash doesn't do a thing for me, but the way you've written this is wonderful, well done
xxxevilgrinxxx
usually slash doesn't do a thing for me, but the way you've written this is wonderful, well done
xxxevilgrinxxx
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it may be Letty, but that would be far too easy. But with your description of 'slim hips', my money (if i were't broke) would be on Jesse.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot. My guess for pairing is Dom/Leon. I picked Leon becuse he is my fav out of all the guys in that movie. Anyway here's a double wow,wow for the total hotness of this story.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you say Hot?! Besides the fact that i absolutely love TFATF fics, this has all the right indregients. I love the way you describe the atmoshpere, how hot it is. Nice build-up to the actual encounter. So who are the mystery pairing? My guess is Dom and Brian, though I could also see Dom and Vince. Will you update, because this was great!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you say Hot?! Besides the fact that i absolutely love TFATF fics, this has all the right indregients. I love the way you describe the atmoshpere, how hot it is. Nice build-up to the actual encounter. So who are the mystery pairing? My guess is Dom and Brian, though I could also see Dom and Vince. Will you update, because this was great!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well. Liked what you've done here, but I'm not completely sure who the two characters are. I would think the one receiving is Brian, but could also be Jesse, due to the reference of a slighter frame. I'll have to go with Brian though. I hope that the one giving is Dominic, but it could also be Vince, 'cause he ain't exactly little either. Good work, but I am curious who they are.